Nice! Your art got better and more consistent. one nit-pick would be that on bottom panel of page 12 I would put some background. a tent or some mountains would fill up the blank space and better place the characters in the camp.

Kneecap scene has induced in me various emotions. So good job doing that.

I don't know why I had hard time keeping up with the story. Maybe I was reading right to left, maybe there was too many characters or just my attention span was too short. Probably just a skill issue on my part.